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I read mateo's writing and it was very good but I have some questions did you ever know that the creatures were in your house, did they leave any tracks or marks? I thought he did good on how he wrote his piece in slow motion insted of saying what it was at the very beginning. I thought that when you came blasting in your friend Kenny's room and woke him up. I enjoyed reading your piece and trying to figure out who was under the rug.

By Trevor Becker